Thursday, October 28, 2010
After practicing my presentation I decided to delete my last slide because I didn't feel like it was important enough and that if I kept it I ran the risk of exceeding my time limit. After my presentation I am going to rethink the organization of my paper to make sure that the elements in paragraphs all connect together and are important enough to be included. Strengths from my presentation I would probably say were speaking loudly and clearly, making eye contact, and showing the connections between evidence and identity from my blog. Changes I would make include reconsidering the groupings of some of my information, and having the slides show on my laptop not just up on the screen so I could have shown the blog website like I had planned when I was discussing the appearance and pictures.
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I also thought you did a great job speaking loudly and directly to the group with good eye contact. I know some people like me would just talk and make eye contact with the teacher and no one else but its only because we are nervous. I was sitting in the back and heard you loud and clear. I liked your presentation overall. Great job!
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ReplyDeleteI thought your presentation was very strong. I didn't have trouble hearing you. I really enjoyed your take on the blog.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your presentation! You had very strong research and i saw nothing wrong with it. keep up the great work, dear!
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